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Clauses: Characters of Clauses and How to Structure Them

Hello dear reader, welcome back! Today we will be discussing clauses and their importance in speech and writing. Understanding clauses is crucial to creating interesting and effective language.

To begin with, a clause is a complete sentence or group of words that includes a subject and a verb. It can also have an object that serves as additional information, and its typical arrangement is subject + verb (+ object).

There are two types of clauses: independent clauses and dependent clauses.

An independent clause is a complete sentence that can stand alone and is punctuated accordingly.


On the other hand, a dependent clause is a sentence that cannot stand on its own and must be joined with an independent clause using a subordinate conjunction, such as although, since, if, when, because, etc. Dependent clauses provide added information to independent clauses.

Here are some examples of sentences using clauses, independent clauses, and dependent clauses:

Examples of clauses (subject + verb):

  • Anna is swimming.
  • Anna is surfing.
  • Anna ran away.
  • Anna is driving.

Examples of clauses with objects (subject + verb + object):

  • Anna is swimming at the beach.
  • Anna is surfing on the surfboard.
  • Anna ran away from her friends.
  • Anna is driving her car.

Examples of independent clauses:

  • Anna is swimming.
  • Anna is surfing.
  • Anna ran away.
  • Anna is driving.

Examples of dependent clauses:

  • Because Anna is swimming...
  • When Anna is surfing...
  • Since Anna ran away...
  • Although Anna is driving...

Dependent clauses can also function as nouns, adjectives, or adverbs:

Clauses as a noun:

  • Anna forgot what she did last night. (What she did last night serves as a noun.)
  • Anna achieved what she wanted yesterday. (Similar to saying "Anna achieved her goals.")

Clauses as an adjective:

  • Anna, who is brave with the ocean waves, is surfing on the fierce waves. (The clause "who is brave with the ocean waves" describes how Anna is.)
  • Anna, who loves her family, always brings foods her family loves. (The clause "who loves her family" serves as an adjective.)

Clauses as an adverb:

  • Anna jumped off her surfboard when a giant wave hit her. (The clause "when a giant wave hit her" explains when Anna jumped off.)
  • Anna was coming home when her mother called her. (The clause "when her mother called her" functions as an adverb.)

In conclusion, being able to read, listen, speak, and write English is a wonderful skill to have, and using tools like ProWritingAid can make proofreading and editing your writing much easier.


Thank you for reading, and have a great day!


Best regards,
Santosa Laksana

Bad Adverbs: How to Recognize and Avoid Bad Adverbs?

To Recall... Adverbs are devices that add color and refine the meaning of verbs, adjectives, and even sentences. They can modify words and change their meaning.

If you don’t know what adverbs are, please visit my earlier article here.


What are bad adverbs?

A bad adverb shows or modifies a weak verb or adjective in your writing, which you could replace with a stronger one.

Example:

Weak adverb: Anna ran quickly to the library.
Strong adverb: Anna rushed to the library.


Overusing adverbs can degrade your writing quality and show laziness.

Not all adverbs end in "ly." Some examples are: afterward, already, almost, back, better, best, even, far, fast, hard, here, how, late, long, low, more, near, never, next, now, often, quick, rather, slow, so, soon, still, then, today, tomorrow, too, very, well, where, yesterday.


There are three categories of bad adverbs:

A. Redundant adverb with the verb it alters.

Example: Anna whispered quietly to her boyfriend.
Correct: Anna whispered to her boyfriend.


B. Adverbs that alter a weak verb or adjective.

Example: Anna talked quietly to her boyfriend.
Strong verb: Anna whispered to her boyfriend.


C. Adverb that doesn't provide solid information.

Examples: extremely, definitely, truly, very, and really.


What are good adverbs?

Good adverbs provide clarity and add meaning to your text.

Examples:

Adverbs that give new information about the time.
Example: Anna came early to the beach to avoid the crowd.

Adverbs that replace clunky words.
Example: Anna held her mother's hand gently.


Done! Keep it up, dear readers. May you become great writers.


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Regards,
Santosa Laksana.



Understanding Articles: What They Are and How to Use Them

Hello, friends! Today, we'll discuss articles - "a," "an," and "the."

Indefinite articles "a" and "an" are used for singular and non-specific nouns. Use "a" before consonant sounds, and "an" before vowel sounds.

Definite article "the" is used for specific nouns, both singular and plural. It can be used with countable and uncountable nouns.


Articles are determiners that show whether a noun is general or specific. 

Here are some examples:

A) "A" and "an" examples:

  • Anna bought a doll and kicked a ball.
  • Anna joins an organization and bought an umbrella.


B) "The" examples:

  • Anna went to the beach alone.
  • Anna walks on the red carpet.
  • Anna watched the movie "The Blue Arrow."
  • Anna answered, "The cars are blue."

Don't overlook the importance of articles in your writing. Thank you for reading, and see you soon for a discussion on bad adverbs to avoid.


Regards,
Santosa Laksana




Anaphora: The Power of Two Good Friends



Because of two good friends, I can save my life.

Because of two good friends, I can move on with my life.

Because of two good friends, I could save my son's behavior, attitude, and character.

Because of two good friends, I can improve my life.

Because of two good friends, I can realize my dream.

Because of two good friends, I can smile.

Because of two good friends, I can feel happy.

Because of two good friends, I can eat.

Because of two good friends, I can keep learning.

Because of two good friends, I can sleep well.

Because of two good friends, I can keep writing.



Thanks to two amazing friends of mine who live far away, I can say that my son's behavior, attitude, and character have improved, I can move on with my life, and I can even pursue my dream of becoming a writer. I owe everything to them.

Because of these two friends, I can smile, feel happy, eat, keep learning, sleep well, and keep writing. I pray for their good health, happiness, and success, and I hope that God, Buddha, and the Beautiful Universe will always bless, protect, and love them.

To express my gratitude and emotions, I have used a rhetorical device called "anaphora." By repeating the same word or phrase at the beginning of each sentence, I hope to create a powerful cadence and emphasis that will stick with my friends forever. They saved my son's and my life, and I want them to know that they are truly special.

Anaphora is a popular rhetorical device that many writers, poets, and speakers use to add emotional impact and make their words memorable. By repeating key words, you can create a powerful message that resonates with your audience.

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Examples of anaphora include Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.'s "I Have a Dream" speech, Charles Dickens' "A Tale of Two Cities," Winston Churchill's "We Shall Fight on the Beaches" speech, and The Police's "Every Breath You Take."


In conclusion, anaphora is a great tool for writers who want to make their words more impactful and memorable. If you want to add emotional weight to your message, consider using repetition to emphasize key words and phrases.


Regards,
Santosa Laksana.

The Art of Adverbs: What's an Adverb and How to Use It In a Sentence?

Writing is an Art - Not a Science.


Like painting, writing is an art that allows us to express our ideas and emotions. While painting uses shapes, lines, colors, tones, and textures on a medium or surface to create a two-dimensional or three-dimensional visual representation — writing uses words to convey meaning and evoke emotions.

In linguistics and grammar, a complete sentence consists of a subject and a predicate, and sometimes an object, and it should follow certain rules of grammar, including punctuation and mechanics.

Adverbs play a crucial role in writing. They add color and refine the meaning of verbs, adjectives, and even entire sentences. Adverbs are modifiers, and writers use them to enhance the reader's understanding of the text.

Examples:
  • Anna walked quickly to the office. "Quickly" modifies the verb "walked."
  • Anna rides her horse very comfortably. "Very" modifies the adjective "comfortable."
  • Anna is riding her horse somewhat cautiously. "Somewhat" modifies the adverb "cautiously."
  • Unfortunately, Anna can't make it to our party. "Unfortunately" modifies the entire sentence.


Not all adverbs end with "-ly." Some examples include afterward, already, almost, back, better, best, even, far, fast, hard, here, how, late, long, low, more, near, never, next, now, often, quick, rather, slow, so, soon, still, then, today, tomorrow, too, very, well, where, yesterday.


Although adverbs can enhance a sentence, using redundant adverbs is unnecessary.

Examples:

  • Anna sprints quickly to chase her dog. "Quickly" is redundant because sprinting is always quick.
  • Anna pouts sadly at the loss of her shoes. "Sadly" is redundant because pouting is always sad.


Writers should use adverbs thoughtfully and sparingly.


When to use an adverb: 

To add context or new information, such as showing time and place.

Example: Anna came early to her friend's wedding rehearsal.


To replace clunky phrasing.

Example: Anna gently pulled her sister's hand.


When other words won't work.

Example: He was crying happily.


When to replace an adverb:

When it restates part of the word it modifies or is redundant.

Example: Anna whispered to her sister.


When it changes a vague or weak verb.

Example: Anna screamed for help as the water gushed in.


When you use "very" or "really."

Example: The humongous elephant.


If you want to remove adverbs from your writing, consider using ProWritingAid, which can help identify adverbs and suggest alternative ways to express yourself.


Writing is an art that requires skill, practice, and patience. Adverbs can enhance your writing, but it's crucial to use them thoughtfully and sparingly. Keep writing, and don't be afraid to experiment with different techniques to improve your craft.


Best regards,
Santosa Laksana.

Comprehensive Guide to Adjectives in English Grammar

Are you a non-native English speaker aspiring to become a writer, proofreader, or editor in English? If so, a comprehensive understanding of English grammar is crucial to your success, especially in learning about adjectives.

Adjectives are one of the 22 types of grammar that I learned from the grammar guide on ProWritingAid. To perfect your grammar understanding and skills, it is essential to have an overall understanding of what adjectives are.

Here are five complete explanations of what adjectives are:


1. Adjectives are words that modify or describe nouns.
2. Adjectives can describe the qualities of nouns.
3. Adjectives can describe the quantity of nouns.
4. Adjectives come in three forms: absolute, comparative, and superlative.
5. Adjectives have strong and weak forms.



Below are example sentences and an explanation of each:


1. Adjectives are words that modify or describe nouns.

Based on my research, adjectives only describe or modify nouns. They do not describe or modify verbs, adverbs, or other adjectives.


2. Adjectives can describe the qualities of nouns.

Adjectives can describe the qualities of nouns, such as size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, or an opinion on something.

For example:
  • Anna has a large house. (The word "large" describes the quality of the house.)
  • Anna is tall. (The word "tall" describes the quality of Anna.)
  • Anna's car was blue. (The word "blue" describes the quality of Anna's car.)
  • Anna's dog was lovely. (The word "lovely" describes the quality of the dog.)


3. Adjectives can describe the quantity of nouns.

Adjectives can describe the quantity of nouns to describe the number of something.

For example:
  • Anna has many horses. (The word "many" describes the quantity of the horses.)
  • Anna's house is surrounded by many mountains. (The word "many" describes the quantity of the mountains.)


4. Adjectives come in three forms: absolute, comparative, and superlative.

Absolute adjectives cannot compare two or more things.

For example:
  • Anna is beautiful. "Beautiful" describes Anna as a subject. She's not being compared to anything else.
  • Anna is tall. "Tall" describes Anna as a subject. She's not being compared to anything else.

Comparative adjectives compare two or more things.

For example:
  • Anna is more beautiful than her friend, Cloe. The comparative adjective "more beautiful" is used to compare Anna's beauty factor to her friend, Cloe. Anna comes out on top.
  • Anna is taller than Cloe. The comparative adjective "taller" is used to compare Ana's tall factor to her friend, Cloe.
For one-syllable adjectives, you can form their comparative forms by adding the suffix "er" to them. For two-syllable adjectives that end with "y" (e.g., happy), drop the "y" and add "ier" (happier). For multisyllabic adjectives, add the word "more" as a modifier.


Superlative adjectives show something that has the highest quality.

For example:
  • Anna is the most beautiful among her friends. The superlative adjective "most beautiful" shows that Anna has peak levels of beauty. Her friends can't be "more beautiful" than Anna.
  • Anna is the tallest among her friends. The superlative adjective "tallest" shows that Anna has achieved peak levels of "tall". Her friends can't be "taller" than Anna.


5. Adjectives" can be either strong, providing clear and specific images of the things they describe, or weak and unclear.

Examples of strong and weak adjectives:
  • Anna is very happy. (Weak adjective)
  • Anna is ecstatic. (Strong adjective)
  • Today's weather is very hot. (Weak adjective)
  • Today's weather is sweltering. (Strong adjective)
  • Anna will be very glad to see her friend, Cloe. (Weak adjective)
  • Anna will be delighted to see her friend, Cloe. (Strong adjective)
  • Anna is very funny. (Weak adjective)
  • Anna is hilarious. (Strong adjective)

When choosing adjectives, it's important to use strong adjectives that accurately convey your intended meaning.

However, there are cases where weak adjectives can be used to soften your writing and make it more elegant.

For instance:
  • Even though I was so tired and my body was full of wounds, I felt great; I finally got to the peak of the Himalayas.
  • Even though I was so tired and my body was full of wounds, I felt good; I finally got to the peak of the Himalayas.
  • Even though I was so tired and my body was full of wounds, I felt pretty good; I finally got to the peak of the Himalayas.

These examples show that weaker adjectives can help illustrate situations that are in the middle of the continuum between perfect and worst. In this case, "pretty good" means you're okay, but not at 100%.


Best regards,
Santosa Laksana.

Smiling Through the Pandemic: My Journey to Capture Heartfelt Smiles in Photos


On a sunny day, the lush green leaves of the trees were picturesque. The view of the garden and pine trees was clearly visible from my house window. After finishing my gardening work of weeding, fertilizing, and watering at 12:30 pm, I realized I needed to work harder during the Covid-19 pandemic as my garden was my only source of income. With no guests at my inn, the current atmosphere was filled with anguish, impatience, grief, friction, rivalry, and personal prestige, making it hard for people to smile. However, I decided to smile wholeheartedly to spread joy and took a picture with my digital camera.



I sat in front of the dragon statue, a relic from my parents' era, and struggled to smile genuinely for the camera. Negative moods from the outside made it difficult, but I persisted until my lips vibrated. Even a forced smile can look genuine.



This photograph is the perfect result of my countless attempts to practice the heartfelt-smile. I lost count, maybe it was the 60th or more, but I finally achieved a sweet smile. I realized my cheek muscles had become rigid from lack of use. Even when I tried to smile, my face would vibrate and tremble. But I persisted, determined to create a smiley face that I could share with everyone.



Wow! You rock! Thank you for reading. It's a familiar routine for my dog, Blackxi, to approach me whenever I'm relaxing in the wide doorway of my home. While taking selfies, I picked her up and put her in my lap. Though she wasn't fond of it, I managed to pose with her for a photo. Unfortunately, she didn't look at the camera and I had to smile alone.



There's always a second chance, and I believe in that idiom. I was ready to take another selfie with Blackxi and gently coaxed her to look at the camera. With my index finger poised on the shutter button, I clicked as soon as she turned her head. But alas, the shot was a miss as Blackxi turned her head even further to the left. Once again, I ended up smiling alone in the photo.



"Don't give up... Don't give up...! You can break the rule about second chances and keep trying," I told myself. I decided to try again, this time with more excitement to capture Blackxi's attention. I practiced smiling for a few minutes, trying to make it look as excited as possible. Finally, I felt ready. I lifted Blackxi onto my lap and pointed her towards the camera, maintaining my excited smile. I clicked the shutter button, hoping for the best... but she still didn't want to look at the camera. Despite my efforts, I ended up smiling alone once again.



Patience is key... Patience will bring happiness. I gently shook Blackxi, rocked her, and stroked her fur softly. She tried to jump off my lap, but I held her tightly. My right hand was starting to feel sore from holding the camera for so long. I kept telling myself, "If Blackxi and I can smile together in front of the camera, it will bring joy to my blog's visitors." Finally, I saw that she was looking at the camera, so I quickly pressed the shutter button - CLICK...-! Here, I smiled shyly with relief. I almost gave up, but patience paid off.



Do dogs feel shy when looking at the camera, or are they not confident about being photographed? Half-obsessed, I tried once more to capture a shot with a confident feeling, smiling with full confidence! I lifted my chest, and so did Blackxi. I filled myself with a sense of belief that this was going to succeed. I strengthened my smile and kept my chest upright while lifting Blackxi's body and pointing her towards the camera lens.



Now, I understand my dog Blackxi's personality. She loves playing around me, but she doesn't like being carried or photographed. Despite this, I kept trying to take a selfie with her, smiling with all my might. But then, I had an epiphany! I am an unstoppable force in the universe. I won't give up until I achieve my goal. I was determined to capture a heartfelt smile on both of our faces, which I can share with the world and make you smile. And finally, here it is, the photograph below!



I managed to make Blackxi look at the camera by using my hand. Yes... I am an unstoppable force of the universe.



I felt satisfied with the photos I took with Blackxi, so I released her to play around me. However, she just sat on the floor next to me. I decided to spend my spare time in the afternoon reading a novel by C.J. Sansom called "The Winter in Madrid." But, I didn't want to miss capturing this moment and turning it into a beautiful memory for the future. So, I grabbed my digital camera once again and decided to take a picture in the style of social media pictures, featuring my legs and feet. As I posed for the photo, I smiled to myself.



I was intrigued to photograph my legs and feet, so I took a picture. CLICK...! Oh my God...! My feet looked so sad, terrible...! But once again, I reminded myself that I am an unstoppable force of the universe. I must be able to make my feet smile cheerfully. With this belief, I managed to take a perfect selfie with my dog, and my feet also looked great in the picture. You can see the picture below.



I hope to share my happiness with a heartfelt smile that I have successfully achieved. And if you are happy after reading this story, please be generous and share it with your friends. That's all from me...I'm okay! Thanks.

Best of luck to you!
Santosa Laksana

Finding Peace and Happiness in the Garden

 


In the morning, I waited for work in the garden, sitting at the doorway of my guest house that lacked a door. Facing east, I watched the sunrise through a wide window that was also doorless. Two gigantic pine trees stood before me, with weasels running up their trunks, chasing each other. The cool air wrapped around me, bringing me a sense of peace and happiness.

My vegetables grow healthy, without diseases or pests. I could already picture the future harvest. In the past, sadness and disappointment had been my companions, but today they had vanished, replaced by self-esteem and pride. Gratefulness filled me, and I felt optimistic about the future.

As I sat there, I contemplated the growth of happiness and peacefulness within myself. No matter what happened, no matter the cheap price of my yields, I would keep planting and cultivating my happiness. Despite the dislike and the obstacles of others, I would move forward.

When my son called me to work, I rose and replied, "Yes, I'm excited, let's go."


Best of luck to you!
Santosa Laksana


Hurray... I Can Beat the White Rust Disease on My Mustard Greens


For six years, I have been planting mustard greens. Recently, I encountered an issue that I felt I couldn't overcome: there were white spots on the underside of my mustard greens leaves. After browsing on Google, I found out that it was white rust, a fungus that can survive for long periods of time in dry conditions and can spread through the wind. I felt hopeless because there were no complete explanations about how to cure this disease. The clues were rotating the crops, planting only disease-free seeds, applying the right fungicide, removing diseased/infected leaves, and watering through the underside of the leaves.

Meanwhile, I had to save my crops at that moment. I kept trying to spray it with fungicide and pesticide and watering as suggested, but to no avail. In the middle of my hopelessness, my son suggested using vinegar mixed with liquid soap, and I added a little salt. With new hope, I asked my son to make the highest concentration of this mixture, and I smeared it on each infected leaf with a paintbrush instead of spraying it. I also experimented with using the highest-concentration pesticide.

Five days after applying our mixture, the white spots on the underside of the leaves changed to powder and fell off. The next day, I watered the plants as suggested, and the white rust was completely removed and disappeared. My experiment using the highest-concentration pesticide also succeeded.






I was able to save my crops perfectly, and I hope this is the last of the various issues I've had with my mustard greens.

I'm eager to share the success of my experiment with you. So if you're facing the same problem as me, follow my lead. You'll see that my method works.

Use a high concentration formula or the highest concentration pesticide, but don't spray it. Instead, use a paintbrush to apply it only to the infected or diseased leaves.

Here's the formula I used:
  • 250 ml Water
  • 1 teaspoon Vinegar
  • 1/2 teaspoon Liquid Soap
  • Two pinches of Salt

Good luck,
Santosa Laksana

Reading Books is the Worst Thing...!

No...! The answer is no...! Reading is the best thing you must do...! It has saved my life. When I faced a problematic position twenty years after 1997, I turned to books for guidance. They always helped me find the right path, and often confirmed that I had already taken the right steps.
I started with the sterling or dyed-in-the-wool books, including those written by best-selling authors. They contain the most honest words that can open your heart and mind.

At a difficult time when I had lost mutual trust with others, my work was suffering, and my marriage had ended in divorce, I found solace in reading. I had to work hard to provide for my child, and I was under immense pressure to make the right decisions.

I stumbled upon a monastery that had a library, where I could borrow books for free. I started with the Dhammapada and Jataka books, which taught me how to cultivate patience. From there, I read every book I could find on psychology and motivation to help me understand myself and others.

Today, I continue to read ebooks to gain knowledge and improve my life. I can speak and write in English, and I have a hope of freeing myself from isolation. Reading is the best thing you can do for yourself. It can open doors and help you see the world in a different light.


Sincerely,
Santosa Laksana

The Lucky Days with Lisa and Ophelie



At six o'clock in the morning, my mobile phone rang. "Riiing... riiing... riiing..." I answered and heard a woman's voice say, "Hello, good morning. Is this Kusuma? I'm Lisa."

"Hi, Lisa. How are you?" I replied.

"I've arrived in Malang. Can I come to your place right now? Would that be okay?"

"Yes, please come. I've prepared your room," I said.

"Thank you. I'll arrive at your place in one or two hours," Lisa replied.

"Great, see you soon!"

An hour and thirty minutes later, my phone rang again. "Riiing... riiing...!! Yeah, hello, Lisa."

"Hello, Kusuma. I've arrived at the address you gave me. Where is your house?"

"My dad, Santosa, will pick you up," I said.

Ten minutes later, Santosa arrived with another motorbike driver, followed by Lisa and her friend Ophelie.

"Hi, Kusuma!" said Lisa.

"Hello, Lisa!" I replied.

Santosa then said, "My son, please show them their room."

I led Lisa and Ophelie to their room and said, "Here is your room, number seven. Please enjoy it."

Lisa said, "Wow, a vast bed...!"

"I thought you came alone?" I asked Lisa.

"This is my friend; she joined me to travel to Indonesia for the first month," Lisa replied.

"Hi, what's your name?" I asked Lisa's friend.

"Hi, my name is Ophelie," she replied.

"Nice to meet you, Ophelie," I said.

Suddenly, the driver who had helped my dad deliver Lisa and Ophelie came over to us and said, "Hello, Lisa."

"Minta uang jasa buat tadi nganterin ke sini," the driver said in Indonesian.

"Berapa, pak?" I asked.

"Yaahh... berapa aja," the driver replied.

I translated to Lisa that the driver was asking for money, and he said that it was up to us how much we wanted to give.

"Berapa, pak?" I asked again.

Then I suggested to Lisa, "I think twenty thousand rupiah is good for him."

"Okay, terima kasih," said Lisa in Indonesian. It turned out that Lisa had learned some Indonesian words.

"Thank you," the driver answered.

After Lisa and Ophélie finished organizing their backpack and some stuff, Santosa came to their room and asked, "Have you had breakfast?"

"No, not yet," answered Lisa.

I asked, "Are you a vegetarian?"

"Yes, I am. No milk, no meat, but sometimes I eat fish," replied Lisa.

"Oh, okay. What about eggs?" I asked again.

"I eat eggs," Lisa replied.

Ophélie said, "For me, I'm good with everything, except spicy-! hehehe..."

"Yup... Ophélie isn't a vegetarian," said Lisa.

"Okay, great, I got it. So next time I cook, I know what I have to make," I said.

Santosa spoke, "I'll buy local food that has white rice and corn rice with a lot of vegetables blended with grated coconut on top of the rice. Do you like spicy food?"

"Eehhh...! Not really," replied Lisa.

"And Ophélie?" asked Santosa.

"I'm not good with spicy food," replied Ophélie.

"Okay, I'll go now," said Santosa as he went to buy breakfast.

Meanwhile, I showed Lisa and Ophélie around the house. "I'm going to show you where the bathrooms are. Go downstairs. Sorry, the place is still messy because we're renovating the second floor."

"It's okay, good! Thank you," said Lisa.

"Do you want to look upstairs, where we're renovating the roofs?" I asked.

"Okay, this is so big. And only both of you are keeping this house and doing this renovation!" Lisa commented on our house.

"Yup, only me and my dad. So from this second floor, you can see Mount Semeru, the highest mountain in East Java. And this mountain is an active volcano."

"Wooow.....!" Lisa and Ophélie responded together.

Santosa came back with breakfast (Nasi jagung urap-urap), Javanese food. After we finished eating, Lisa said, "Uuhh... we need to wash our clothes."

"Oh... okay, and we'll plant tomatoes," I answered.

"We'll help you!!!" Ophélie responded.

"It's okay for today. You guys can take a rest and manage your stuff. Tomorrow we can do activities together, can't we?" I suggested.

"Yeah, okay...!" Lisa and Ophélie agreed.

"So feel at home and act like family!" Santosa said.

"Oh, ya... thank you, Santosa," Lisa and Ophélie replied.

"Okay, see you. We'll start planting, and at 10 am, we'll take a nap for one hour. Have a good time," Santosa said as he left.

Lisa and Ophélie washed their clothes and arranged their stuff. The next day, I asked them how they slept, and Lisa said they had a long trip before and slept really well.

"Okay, I'm glad, Lisa. So this morning, I'll make Soto. Maybe you can help me," I said.

"Yes...!" replied Lisa.

"I'll cook plenty so we can eat Soto for the next three days. It'll save time, and we won't have to cook all the time."

"Yes, that's good, more practical."

"We only need two people to cook. So one of you can help Santosa move the piece of timber downstairs to another place."

"I'll help to cook," said Lisa.

Ophélie chimed in, "Yes, and I'll help Santosa move the timber."

"Let's start!" we exclaimed together.

Two hours later, I said, "Okay, Soto is almost done."

"Wuuuuu... this Soto required a lot of preparation!!!" said Lisa.

"I'll check on Ophélie and tell them that the meal will be ready in ten minutes." I went downstairs to the bathroom area.

"Wooow...!!! you guys have finished moving it, amazing, amazing!!" I exclaimed.

"Ophélie worked so fast to lift the timber, she just kept working," said Santosa.

"Yes, I'm happy...!" said Ophelie.

"Lisa, you have to see this. They already finished moving the timber, really fast," I exclaimed to Lisa.

"Okay, I'll take a look," replied Lisa. "Wow, they finished it."

"Yes, Lisa, it's beyond my expectations. I thought it would take two days to move the timber, but Ophélie and my dad only took two hours, including arranging it, cool!"

"Oh, really?"

"Yes, Ophélie is incredible."

"Son, is the Soto ready?" asked my dad.

"Yes, sir. Lisa did great in cutting the vegetables."

"It's a beautiful meal, with a lot of ingredients," said Lisa.

"Let's go, we're hungry," said Santosa.

"Yeah, let's go," we exclaimed together.

Later that day, I said to Lisa, "I would like to try French cuisine, but just a simple one, because it'll be difficult to find original ingredients here."

"Oh yeah, we like it too. Now, we need to think about what we have to make."

After a long discussion between Lisa and Ophélie, Lisa said, "Okay, we'll make French fries and hamburgers with vegetable steak."

"Great! Tomorrow morning we'll go to the market," I said.

The next morning, Lisa, Ophélie, and I went to the local market to get the ingredients. After wandering around and chatting with some locals, we got everything we needed and went home. After arriving home, we prepared the ingredients and had breakfast with the leftover Soto from yesterday.

Lisa and Ophélie started cooking, and we rested for an hour and a half. At noon, I heard them playing music in front of my room and received a message from Lisa's phone saying, "We're ready to make the bread. We can start now."

Excited to cook, I opened the door and recorded all the processes as they made bread and hamburgers with vegetable steak. Making the bread took a long process, but it was worth it. The bread was really delicious, and this was my first time having homemade fresh bread with my dad. We also had three types of jam. It was so good that we forgot the process took over an hour, and we were starving by the end. It was a perfect day.

"Our stomachs were full, and our energy had been restored, thanks to Lisa's excellent bread. We continued to make hamburgers, enjoying the preparation process, especially me. It was a rare moment to cook together with such sincere friends and create something delicious.

Lisa made the vegetable steak perfectly, while Ophélie finalized the burger toppings. The burgers were beautiful and tasty. We had dinner together, drank some beer, and sang, creating the best moment.

On the fourth day, we continued to move the piece of timber together in the backyard of our house. The weather was cloudy with drizzles, and there were a lot of fleas on the ground. They jumped onto our legs, and some had bitten us, but we ignored them and kept going, listening to Lisa's favorite music.

"Okay, we're finished," I said.

After choosing the timber that could be used and couldn't, we could take a break. "For the next step, my dad and I will sort it out to build the roof," I explained.

"This is a big house, so there's a lot of work to do to repair the roof," Lisa commented.

"Kusuma, since the work is done tomorrow, you can take Lisa and Ophélie sightseeing around the village and visit the temple," Santosa suggested.

"Sounds like a plan. It'll be my first time exploring the village on foot. We'll have a nice walk together tomorrow morning!" I enthusiastically agreed with my dad's suggestion.

"Okay!" Santosa replied.

"Great!" I said.

The next day on day five, at 7 am, I exclaimed, "I'll take a bath, woooooo... arctic!"

"Good morning, Kusuma," greeted Lisa.

"Hi, good morning, Lisa."

"I'll prepare the lunch box. We can have crepes, okay?" Ophélie said, getting ready for sightseeing.

"Yes, that's good, Ophélie," I replied with happiness.

"Son, I have made a route map for you, the road to go, and home. Just follow the map directions," my father said, handing me the map.

"Thanks, Dad."

"Anytime."

Lisa, Ophélie, and I finished doing all the preparations for sightseeing.

"See you, Santosa," said Lisa.

"See you later, Santosa," said Ophélie.

"Bye, Dad, wish us luck, hehe..." I said happily.

"Okay, enjoy the trip, guys," said Santosa with a wide smile.

We walked through small paths, passed village after village, and through the pine forest. We headed straight toward the temple, and finally, we arrived.

"Okay, we're at the temple," I said.

"Kusuma, do you want to drink?" Lisa offered me a drink.

"Yes," I answered.

"Lisa, what do you want to drink?" I asked Lisa to order a drink in a warung or small restaurant in Indonesia.

"I want white coffee," Lisa answered.

"I wanna try this coffee milk with ginger," Ophélie ordered her favorite drink.

"That's good, Ophélie," I responded.

"Did you ever try this, Kusuma?" asked Ophélie.

"Yes, I've tried all the flavors mostly."

"And me. I want this one. Pop ice with mango flavor," I chose my favorite drink.

"Surrpp... aahhhh... this is good!!!" we exhaled and said aaahhhhhh.... together.

"Here we go, time for crepes," Ophélie gave a surprise by bringing out the crepes.

"Okay, bon appétit," I spoke French.

"Eehhmm... delicious, this is simple food but very good," I was impressed with the delicious crepe flavor.

"Yes...!" answered Ophélie.

"Finally, we arrived at this temple after three hours of walking," I said.

"Yes, this is a long trip," Lisa answered.

"Even though this is my first time walking, I'm good. I can do it," I said.

"Yes, sure, Kusuma!" Ophélie and Lisa responded.

We relaxed at the temple, enjoying the atmosphere and taking some pictures. Meanwhile, Ophélie hunted for butterflies while taking photographs.

"Oh! I thought it was time to go home. If you see the clouds, it looks like it'll rain soon," I said.

"Yeah, let's go!" Lisa and Ophélie answered in unison.

"Okay, let's go!" I exclaimed.

We walked out of the temple.

"So, you guys will leave on Sunday?" I asked. "I just found out yesterday from Santosa."

"Oooh, you just found out. Sorry Kusuma, we already talked about it on the first day. We thought you already knew," said Ophélie.

"Aaah, it's okay. So, two days later, will you leave?"

"Yes," Lisa answered.

"This is the longest stay we've ever done in one place. Before this, we only stayed for a couple of days before moving on. But in your place, this is the longest one we're staying," Ophélie explained.

"Yup, and we've done a lot of activities here," Lisa added.

"I'm thankful that you felt comfortable staying in our house," I said.

"Yes, we like it. We enjoy the local atmosphere, away from tourists or places full of Westerners, and blending with local people," said Lisa.

"Yes!" agreed Ophélie.

"Guys, we need to follow this path and keep going straight," I said, cutting the conversation.

"Okay!" Lisa and Ophélie answered.

After walking for about fifteen minutes, we found a three-way intersection, but we kept going straight. On the way, we met a lady who had just finished working on her farm.

"Where are you going, boy?" the lady asked me.

"Eehhh... we're going to Batu Gilang. From there, we can go home to Wonosari, can't we?" I answered.

"Yes, that's right. But if you continue walking on this path and keep going straight, you'll end up in the big jungle! You've passed the right path," the lady explained. "My house is near Batu Gilang."

"Ah, what!!! Wooo... luckily we met you. If not, it would be a different story. We could have gotten lost in the jungle," I was shocked. "So, can we follow you?"

"Yes, you're right. Please follow me. By the way, where do your friends come from?"

"Oh, they're from France."

"Ooo... Very faraway place."

"Yuuhh..." I exhaled.

"Lisaaa... Ophélieee...! We're going back following this lady, let's go," I told them.

We were back on the right track going back home.

"Thank you, ma'am," I said.

"Yes, from here, just follow the cement road, and you will arrive," said the madam.

"Terima kasih (Thank you)," replied Lisa in Indonesian.

"Oh, Kusuma, I need to use the restroom," said Lisa again.


"Sure, there's one in Batu Gilang," I replied.

We rested at Batu Gilang temple, and to our surprise, the man who guards the temple offered to show us his pet snake.

"Okay," we agreed.

"What species of snake is that, sir?" I asked. "Is that a python?"

"Wooo..." exclaimed Lisa and Ophelie.

"Why does he keep the snake?" Lisa was curious.

At first, the snake was very aggressive and tried to escape many times, coiling around the man's arm. But the man remained calm, and after twenty minutes, the snake relaxed and calmed down, allowing the man to play with it like a pet. He even offered us to hold the snake, but we politely refused, although he cleverly convinced Ophelie to touch it.

"Okay, just touch the head, alright? Come on!" The man persuaded us.

Ophelie agreed to touch it, but Lisa and I remained cautious.

"Okay, just the head, right?" said Ophelie.

Despite our concerns, Lisa and I exclaimed, "No...no...no...no...no...no...no...no!!!! Sir, don't do that!"

"Wooo...! Okay, I'll stay calm and not make sudden movements!!!" replied Ophelie, surprised.

"Be careful, Ophelie!" warned Lisa and me.

"Sir, please take it back!" Lisa and I said to the man.

"That's not a good idea, considering you said the snake is still wild and aggressive," Lisa added.

Finally, he took the snake back from Ophélie. We decided it was time to take a break, said our goodbyes, and continued walking home.

"Thank you, sir," we said.

"That was a strange experience. He just offered to show us his snake," said Lisa.

"Yeah, it was a strange day, but also pretty cool!" I said.

We laughed together.

After walking for three hours, we finally arrived home safely.

On day six:

We spent the day relaxing, talking, and enjoying coffee and Milo on a rainy day with the sound of thunder in the background. It was a quiet atmosphere, with not much activity around us except for the sounds of nature. We boiled hot water to take a warm bath in the cold weather, which helped us relax and release all the tension.

In the evening, I found a big-horn beetle, which was amazing. It was rare to find this type of beetle, so we took the opportunity to take a picture of it. Lisa painted it in her journal, which was already filled with many beautiful paintings.

After spending time with the beetle, we let it rest. Then, Ophélie showed me something new, which was very cool.

"Wow, that's cool!" I said.

"Lisa loves to play it, and she's an expert," Ophélie explained.

"What's it called?" I asked Lisa.

"I call it 'Balls' or 'Poi Balls'," Lisa replied. "I'll show you my favorite movement."

Lisa's movements were beautiful. She directed the balls with balance and accuracy, creating a beautiful dance with Poi Balls.

That night was a beautiful moment that will stay with us, especially for me and Santosa.

The following Sunday morning was our last day with our friends, Lisa and Ophélie. I made breakfast called nasi pecel.

"Breakfast is ready," I said.

"Thank you, Kusuma," Ophelie and Lisa replied. "That looks delicious."

"After breakfast, I'll tell a story with origami," said Ophélie.

"Wow, I can't wait. It'll be a wonderful story after breakfast," I responded.

After we finished breakfast, Ophélie prepared to tell a story with origami.

"Okay, are you ready? I'll start the story. This is about The King who Lost His Key," Ophelie began the story.

In the video below, Ophélie presents the story of "The King with a Key." Please enjoy and have fun!

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Even though we only have an origami picture of the Lucky Key, we still appreciate the meaning behind it as a symbol of luck, charm, and a memento left behind by Ophélie and Lisa. They shared their lucky strength with us. Finally, the time had come to say goodbye. Although it was difficult, we knew that our friendship and camaraderie would not end here. We waved happily as the vehicle slowly drove away, taking Lisa and Ophélie to their next destination to continue their travels. Thank you, Lisa and Ophélie, for giving us such splendid memories that we can now share in this story. Thank you for sharing your happiness and luck with us.

Stay happy always. Kusuma and Santosa Written by: Kusuma AS. Writer Edited by: Santosa Laksana